EXT. A SMALL HOUSE-GARDEN – EARLY MORNING, RAIN SOUNDS
A young man appeared out of no where, smiling, holding a coffee cup with his left hand
He caught it, the smell of the latent rain... He ran with his coffee cup in one hand, breathed deeply, exhaled, watched the vapors, enjoyed it, then he filled his cup... It became coffee with rains, he took a sip & relieved his pains
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FADE OUT:
He Jumped bare-feet, felt each drop on his face, across his hair, until turning his grayish color into a perfect one, just like a rainbow
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ZOOM IN:
He finished his rain-filled cup, stared inside, found a pen to rewrite, an umbrella & a little heart to gain.
EXT. AN EMPTY SMALL HOUSE-GARDEN, NO RAINS
You Know my opinion ..
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